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In My Kiss

Fingertips trace the shiver
that dives deep into
a fragile heartbeat.
Like a dove's breath,
tenderly caressing
the inner being of
flustered romance..

Feathers land upon a lovers sigh
as skin turns moist from heated moves.
The world rejoices,
for the breath released intertwines
within the receiver's soul tasting
like strawberry cream that

melts upon the tongue..

 

 

Trembling on the edge
of intense pleasure,
molding together
with lover's eyes
time is captured
in a perfect moment.

As innocence is licked away
with cherry syrup that drips bliss
from luscious lips that
curve into sensual sensations
as the earth quakes and the oceans
overflow with pleasured groans.

God's envy such beautiful perfection.
All in the simple kiss shared between
two people in love..

Author notes

Prompt: Kiss


Picture Credit: Lover_by_TrashDoLLs

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  • tomisb
    September 5, 2008

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    I like the way you move from touch and exterior events to the internal and back to the kiss and then to the grander overview in the last verse. You handled the transitions smoothly and the final verse doesn't sound preachy or maudlin. Very smooth and very sensual.
    Peace & Light,
    Tom B.


    • Angelflower
      September 5, 2008

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      Thank you very much for your wonderful comment.. It was really kind of you.. I'm glad that you liked it.


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 30, 2008
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    Devine and softly sensual best of luck in the contest


  • nevadapoet
    August 29, 2008
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    A beautiful write...well done. Great imagery and flow.


  • Riamh
    August 27, 2008
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    What a beautiful poem!
    Well done, Angel.

    Slayer

    • Angelflower
      August 27, 2008
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      Thanks.. Lol. I told you I wasn't good with this kissing stuff..lol. Too much drool can ruin it for life! lol. *hugs*

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