Would you part the curtains of the sky
and cause the sun to shine through?
Would you look deep into my eyes
and tell me 'I love you'?
Would you look beyond my innermost flaws
And see me for who I am?
would you see the real me inside
and let what others see be damned?
Would you lead my fragile heart
into healthy pastures, green
would you long to discover
the secrets that lay , unseen?
Would you love me each new day
that kisses the cheek of earth?
would you pick me up amongst life's ashes
and always boast of my worth?
Would you hold the cords of my heart
make sure it never breaks
would you be a pillar of strength
when all hell threatens to shake?
A contest entry
- Would You... by VoltaicHypnosis.
1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oh this is lovely...i absolutely love the sentiments you express here. and i love the references to the earth and nature, so moving and imaginative. brilliant stuff!!!
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Absolutely beautiful!!! Best in contest!
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This is a wonderful write, it flows beautifully and the imagery is fantastic! well done keep writing and thankyou for sharing xx c
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simply beautiful!! It speaks of true heart and desire, well done... thankyou and good luck!
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