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That Kiss

The soft, warm caress of your lips
against mine
a passionate reunion of tongues and lips
that create sparks of inevitable release
your lips against mine.

Thoughts thinking of nothing but
the sweet nectar of esctasy
that the flower of our mouths secrete
as they become one in matrimonial bliss.

The slow, dancing movement of two souls
locked in an intimate embrace
And as our lips delve deeper
we grasp for air,
only to be once again
submerge beneath the waves
of this stormy ritual,

that electrifying kiss.

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  • strangerforeigner
    September 5, 2008
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    Very sweet. Great imagery. Thanks for entering and good luck!


  • cadtip
    September 2, 2008
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    Sexy!


  • Shadow Lynx
    August 30, 2008

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    Thoughts thinking of nothing but
    the sweet nectar of esctasy
    that the flower of our mouths secrete
    as they become one in matrimonial bliss.
    excellent stanza!, very visually powerful write , best of luck in the contest


  • nevadapoet
    August 29, 2008
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    Awesome write...Great imagery!!


  • Angelflower
    August 27, 2008

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    This was really sweet.. Sensual and soft.. what a kiss is made of thanks much for sharing!! best of luck in the contest..

    Angel


  • Baisi
    August 26, 2008
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    This is beautiful...

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