Alpha to Omega
the continuum of time
curves into a sphere.
All things being harmonious
of a whole,
infinity sketches out creation
in perfection of a circular
existence.
A dimension where entities personify
cycles of understanding
in terms of assimilated growth.
Time being the measure from
which the equation of life
reconciles reality,
as everything is interrelated
and connected.
A circle that perpetuates itself
by the generation of a single source.
Consciousness which evolves around
this source and is expressed
in completeness as being.
A contest entry
- Circles - BIG POINTS!! by CelticQueen.
1500 points, ended September 9, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is a very great poem you did such an great job explaining the thoughtfulness i simply love it
best of luck
--kat
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Wow. Just one word in my mind: Eternity. And you used absolutely everything that describes "Eternity" without actually using the word. AMAZING!
Quite an interesting read =)
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its great
i love this poem it is really really really... good it certainly makes you think about the subjet
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Well, now, I asked for thoughtful poems and you certainly gave me one! I would like to suggest that you try to make certain spots more "poetic" sounding. For example,
in terms of assimilated growth.
rather reminds me of Star Trek's Borg - not particularly poetic.
Your last three stanzas could be considered poetic from a scientist, I guess, and I can certainly see the poetry in the subject. I'd just like to read a poem, is all, and not really a thesis. You have plenty of time to work on it, if you feel so inclined. I really hope you do. It's definitely a piece with merit.
celtic queen
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