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Snakes (Etheree)

Snakes
slither
oft hither
sometimes thither
until they wither
evoking much dither
that is why the unicorn
does dance and prance and blow his horn
and brave tiger resplendent with stripes
Abandons his roar for  cowardly gripes

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    This is great, thank you for entering my contest.
    Many more poems are left in your quill I hope.

    Riftkin


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008
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    a great poem full of some great imagery good luck in the contest


  • Reptile Lady gold member
    August 29, 2008

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    I love this poem very clever are your words
    best wishes in the contest
    Julie