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The flower fairies

Flower fairies
Pigmes and posies
Darling, Sparkling
Merry and Rosy
Laying on they're petals
Looking so cozy
Oh what a beautiful bunch!

Dancing on dew drops
In the spring time
What If I told them
those flowers are mine?
Would they stop dancing
to howl and curse
Would they yell and fight
and complain even worse?

For now I'll stay
out of sight
I rather enjoy
their dancing flight


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  • storiesuntold gold member
    August 30, 2008

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    Lovely piece

    It reminds me of the song and game we use to play ring around the rosie a pocket full of posies upstairs downstairs we all fall down .Enjoyed it


  • Nostalgic Moon
    August 28, 2008
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    hehe this is wonderful! it is verry cute lol
    i love the rhyming too!
    best of luck


  • Pandorea
    August 26, 2008

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    that's cute. i like the idea of you just watchignt he happy fairies.

    thanks for entering


  • SilverWolf
    August 26, 2008

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    Hello!

    This peice was very well written with a great flow! Best of luck in the contest!

    Have a Blessed day!

    SilverWolf