Flower fairies
Pigmes and posies
Darling, Sparkling
Merry and Rosy
Laying on they're petals
Looking so cozy
Oh what a beautiful bunch!
Dancing on dew drops
In the spring time
What If I told them
those flowers are mine?
Would they stop dancing
to howl and curse
Would they yell and fight
and complain even worse?
For now I'll stay
out of sight
I rather enjoy
their dancing flight
A contest entry
- Something About... Anything! by Nostalgic Moon.
450 points, ended September 1, 2008, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Flower Fairies (PIF) by Pandorea.
330 points, ended September 1, 2008, 7 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
I wanna know what you think
Comments
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Lovely piece
It reminds me of the song and game we use to play ring around the rosie a pocket full of posies upstairs downstairs we all fall down .Enjoyed it

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hehe this is wonderful! it is verry cute lol
i love the rhyming too!
best of luck -
that's cute. i like the idea of you just watchignt he happy fairies.
thanks for entering
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Hello!
This peice was very well written with a great flow! Best of luck in the contest!
Have a Blessed day!
SilverWolf




