Let every time you kiss me
all other kisses diaappear
and when i sink into your kiss
let it kiss away all fears.
let every time you kiss my skin
you kiss a hidden part
let your kiss forever remain
the golden kiss upon my heart.
let every kiss that caresses my lips
kiss my worries goodbye
and as my heart responds to your kiss
baby kiss me till I want to cry.
Let every memory of our kiss
kiss spirals of flames into existence
and as you kiss me once again
let this next kiss fill our sky with sweet passionate rain.
Author notes
chosen word is KISS
A contest entry
- What's Your Word? by Poetess12.
2400 points, ended September 8, 2008, 20 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Great work
The descriptions of these kisses are well chosen. Your feelings came through clearly about how good kisses are. A kiss can do all sorts of things to a person. I enjoyed how every kiss refreshed my mind. Why did you choose such a gloomy background for this? It doesnt do the poem justice in my humble opinion
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This is a well written poem.
My favorite lines of your poem are,
"Let every time you kiss my skin
you kiss a hidden part
let your kiss forever remain
the golden kiss upon my heart."
Thanks for your entry.
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