Suddenly
There's no hope in being
B E A U T I F U L
Reality stricken expressions
make it hard to lie
You force it on yourself
You brought this on yourself
Make up for the past
BLOOD RIDDEN & KISSING
Make up with him for
the friends you'll be missing
How can you tell me
things are BETTER this way
So sit on your misery
Indulge in your lies
NOBODY CARES
Deafened with cries
Its amazing what you can be forced to believe
You believe everyone else
Why don't you believe in me?
YOU ONLY
H E A R
WHAT YOU
WANT TO
when will you want to
HEAR THIS
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Written January 17th, 2004
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its so refreshing to read poetry that i like, good job, i remember thinking that your poems were some of my favorites before, but i forgot about it,.
Lauren -
Hold on...
Okay, this is what I have to say:
I liked it. I really did. But when I first read it, I was confused. Not with the message it was conveying, but with the manner in which it was conveyed. It seemed to me that there were several different ideas thrown in at once, but when I read it through a couple more times, I found that they all fit together. Maybe it was just me, as I tend to have bad judgment. Still, now that I've had a chance to fully understand this poem, I'd have to say, it's good. Confusing, but good.
Edited on Jan 17, 9:34 because 'Needed some time to think about it.'.
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