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In the Dark of Night

While traveling down the street,

  There was strangers making meets.

The light from the lamps only made a glare.

  Trash cans were kicked over here and there.

In the windows I could tell someone was out there.

 

Some dogs did bark, from cars that were parked.

  They did a light, it showed by a spark.

You could hear a motor hum,

  Someone made a run.

Then there was the noise of a gun.

 

In the alley I creeped, in a puddle covering my feet.

  It was so scary it raised my neck's hair.

I wanted to run, but for the sake of a gun.

  I slipped to a bar door left ajar.

Out the back door I made my retreat.

 

I found friends a waiting, and home we went.

  A phone message was sent.

To my bedroom we all made up lies.

  In fear that somewhere there was a  spy.

I though one of us was going to fry.

 

 

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  • PrabhuDayal Khattar silver member
    August 27, 2008

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    Humm..you took me into the depth of your words and made me to understand the various sketches you built here...well done...