Would you heal me when I was scarred?
Would you care if I cried?
I feel pain in heart,
my soul, and I wish I would die.
Would you save me if I asked for aid?
Or would you laugh as I lay on the floor and died?
I wish you would stop standing there,
and actually catch me if I fall.
Because of you I have this pain,
and if you would hurt me,
then I can certainly hurt you.
A contest entry
- Would You... by VoltaicHypnosis.
1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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Yes to all questions except the last one =)
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Aww that's a sad poem! I think we've all wondered this after someone has hurt us!
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Ohh this is great -- filled with pain but ending in threat - perfect combination.
Well done! Thanks for entering and best of luck!
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