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Blanket of Stars





under a glittering
                blanket of stars
nature beauty is
                shown and it glee
I dream of us on
                the shores of the beach
making love and careless
                  of what the world see'
but only if you were
                there next to me

I watched the moon 
                dance in the water
words of embrace
              I dare not utter
lonesome, humbling
, and graceful
              only if I could say how
much I am thankful
              to share my dreams
with thee, that is joyful




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  • Jornada
    September 1, 2008
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    Delicate, and full of light, even if only under the moon.


    • theburninglegend silver member
      September 1, 2008
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      Jornada

      thank your for the read, and hope you enjoyed your stay here; and true even if only ender the moon, the piece will still show light, and its delicacy again thank you for your read and kind comments

      thelegend

  • longshot
    August 28, 2008
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    what a pretty piece thank you for sharing.

    • theburninglegend silver member
      August 29, 2008
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      thank you :)

      well I am glad you like this and thank you for the read, hope to see you aroun dsome more. Thank you very much

      ***Hugs***
      thelegend