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Unwanted Torture

I feel grim torture biting,
having to put up with your
lies be my torture,
and in so many other ways
you torture me

It don’t even matter that
the torture you won’t admit
For I do know deep down you
regret the torture I feel

So no use in crying over
this torture you transmit
Just understand that my
torture stems from your
very behaviour

You torture all who love
you, nothing it seems is
taboo to your torture
I can’t work out why you
torture me so
This pain I feel is all
the torture bestowed

Unwanted torture you
planted in my mind ages
ago, now ripened to flow
down ferocious rivers of
torture, and I've taken to 
scream the torture away

Author notes

This poem was a word prompt, word I had chosen was torture obviously.

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  • Poetess12
    August 27, 2008
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    I like how you used the word "Torture" in your poem.

    My favorite part of your poem is,

    "Unwanted torture you
    planted in my mind ages
    ago, now ripened to flow
    down ferocious rivers of
    torture, and I've taken to
    scream the torture away."

    Thanks for your entry.