All over the world,
A song of peace is heard...
People are laughing, people are crying,
Sharing their hopes and dreams;
Their songs ring out across the land,
Sowing fresh seeds of peace.
Brothers and sisters unite in common bond;
Their voices blend together in harmony,
Breathing inspiration into the darkest night.
Many have fought in the battles of history,
Now rest their weary souls...
Their stars will shine forever in eternal skies,
The flame of hope never dies.
Author notes
harriet567
A contest entry
- contest # 77, Dona Nobis Pacem by Elvenfairy.
450 points, ended September 3, 2008, 12 entries
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Comments
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There is much deep thought gone into scuh a great piece. The meaning in this is strong, you have produced excellent descriptive work, good write.
Thanks,
Well done,
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Thanks for your comment and for the contest - Congrats to the winners!
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this is pretty good. it has a good meaning behind it and it makes for some good reading. You've got a 25 for this poem. Added with your first poem you've got a total of 55 points. Excellent work. Thank you for entering the contest and the best of luck to you. kahy
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This is a real powerful write with a lot of truth
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Thanks for your comment and for holding the contest. Congrats to the winners!
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This is a nice upbeat write. Good imagery, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.
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whisper
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wow!!! that was beautiful!!! i loved this!!!! i dont think there is a part of this poem that i dont like!! amazing! it was beautiful! truly and honestly!! good job! and so inspiritaional, too!!!
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Thank you!
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np! it really was great!! and sorry if i sounded a little too much like a suck-up. lolz. but it really was great!
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That is a beautiful sentiment, and I wish so much that it could be true....(alas, I am somewhat of a cynical person at times...) A lovely poem, and wonderful images. Great write!
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Thank you!
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