Brilliant dances glisten through the vivid sky,
illuminating round the star shrouded night.
Lingering lightly across moon shadowed paths...
lights prance so daintily among stone lined streets.
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That is beautiful...the spacing definitely accentuates the wordplay, too, in a way I don't quite understand, but it really does...
This seems to me almost like a snapshot of a poem, expressing so much in so little space. Great! ^_^
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