Verse 1
days about to break
i'll use all that i have
to stay awake
I refuse to rest
I dont want to miss
even one word
you're so far away
but the way that you talk
you feel so close
Pre-chorus
though the night isn't young
i wont rest till you know
Chorus
I'll go, I'll go
where ever you take me
its such a small price
for being crazy
and I know, I know
theres so much left to say
but im fading fast
and i need you to keep me awake
Verse 2
as imposible as you are
i'll break through your guard
if its the last thing i do
but who can tell the difference
from the fantasy world you live in
and what is true
Pre-chorus
thought the night isn't young
i wont rest till you know
Chorus
I'll go, I'll go
where ever you take me
its such a small price
for being crazy
and I know, I know
theres so much left to say
but im fading fast
and i need you to keep me awake
Bridge
as late as it is
and as tired as i am
i wont be the first to say goodnight
as suborn as you are
its always worth the fight
to get just one step closer
to letting you know
Chorus X2
that I'll go, I'll go
where ever you take me
its such a small price
for being crazy
and I know, I know
theres so much left to say
but im fading fast
and i need you to keep me awake
Author notes
Actually really pumped bout this, love the guitar for it and the song in general, though im sure theres still somthing to improve. ( not to crazy bout the title though, still working on that)
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i liked it.
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um thanx?
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idk what else to say...
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"as imposible as you are
i'll break through your guard"
"as suborn as you are
its always worth the fight
to get just one step closer"
Pretty much the whole poem sounds like stuff that Maddy has said to me before.
Those lines especially caught my attention.
You write flawlessly, you know.
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Thanx, means a lot, unfortunately whoever its about will never read it, or know its bout them, doesnt change what it says though haha. Thanx again.
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You aren't gonna give it to him?
I'm guessing its about Frank. -
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Sadly enough its not. its complicated and nothings going to come out of it most likely, so at least for a year it will stay with just me.
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Sorry.
That sucks.
Is it none of my business? -
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No worries, you're kinda easy to talk to, but yea its a bummer. oh well = )
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Wow Michelle...this took my breath away. I could relate so well I got goosebumps. Excellent job, really excellent job
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Glad you liked it, and you did great last night!! your poems were very very good, and the more you read infront of ppl, the easyer it gets, so keep it up.
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Wow, I love the rhythm. And, honestly, I really like it just the way it is.... ^_^.
There are a few typos, though (forgive the nitpicker...)
"but who can tell the difference
from the fantacy (should be fantasy) world you live in
and wat (should be what) is true"
Absolutely brilliant, though.
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