The soul of Mother Earth in
life giving essence cool and crisp
sparkling upon her bosom.
Tantalizing of autumns approach
her hearts song shouted in whispers
to whom will listen.
Her body and soul given to will of man
through the span of time.
Silence echoes in unison woodland calls
rhythm her love carried upon
gentle breezes, her tender kisses
to children her care.
Within her loving caress under sky blue eyes
man's own redemption found......
His soul
Author notes
Picture was a search on http://www.pics.am/
A contest entry
- A Thing Of Beauty Unforgettable by suseann.
900 points, ended August 29, 2008, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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excellent~
This is just excellent..and I love the imagery you used in the poem as well...
Loved the entire poem
But the last 2 lines said it all for me
man's own redemption found
his soul
Penned oh so well
Am so glad we met and I ran across you...
Getting ready to add you to my favs
Hugs
Susan~~~
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Thank you so much for your time in reading and you so kind comment, I'm glad my ramblings have some enjoyment. You are already on my favs.
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A reader hears her softest breathing,feels her warmth caressing the face. And tastes of the turning leaf's waft across the currents of air. Nicely scribed and best of luck in the contest.
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Thank you for the chance to clear the cobwebs and your kind comment.
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