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champing primates

Nibbling primates
don,t ever slumber,
they munch bananas
all day and night,

swinging from tree

to tree  playing Tarzan

in the soft moonlight ,

best not disturb
their crunching right.

 

 

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5. Munching monkeys never nap over.

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    This is great, thank you for entering my contest.
    Many more poems are left in your quill I hope.

    Riftkin