he sucked me in with all his lies ...he thought he thought he had mee but what a mistake..ii can never trust a man nor a boy because all they do is hurt you...no matter the age they are all the same dogs && they really dont care..they want your sex && nothing less...ii wish ii would had never been so stupid now im on a one way track to hell because of that bastard ii swear there is nothing to say nor do but cry && wish ii never met you how you hit me && touched mee ii never liked it its true but ii can do nothing hes gone like the rest of you....ii wish you would die but you do nothing but make mee cry..ii cant stop the tears nor the pain..im going insane..insane from the lies && from the pain...so ii dont know what to do..so ii hope you die && die a horrible death because what ii went through ii cant bare...so ii cry no more for the bitchass person that hurt me..the one that raped me && destroyed me...fuck you && whatever you go through....
be bluntly honest
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again i'm gonna comment on the spacing cause it can be difficult to read when you don't space it...
anyways, after reading it i found that you definitely wrote this poem while under a surge of emotional delerium of grief and resent.
It had a few rhymey parts and was pretty abstract in terms of structure in an interesting way.
btw i'm offended by what your saying about my gender, it make me sad... woof woof
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i appreciate your opinion but it was made to look like that but i'll figure it out so that you'll be able to read it or anybody else thats had a problem with it.
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Aah, So Much pain, made my Eyes full of tears.
I'm amazed how you bear everything, if it was I, I would have died,
So pain, Flowing bloods from viens, ah,
you are so great.
but See, not every guy is Same, but yes some are bad and It's same not every girl is bad, but some are brilliant and loving and caring.
and yeh,
By
The Poet Of Hearts And Beautiful Words
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i got to tell u sumthin but msg me i want u to know sumthing
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wow. a lot of emotion.
very raw.
but there are a few guys out there that actually care.
it takes a while,
but you find him.
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This is a good read with alot of emotion. If this is a personal write all men are not like this the right one will come eventually
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This is really raw and full of emotion. Its kind of like reading a journal entry and it really grabs me as a reader and shows me your pain. Only one suggestion/question- did you mean to do the double i's and & signs for artistic reasons or are they typos?
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yea ii meant to..something ii picked up from a friend..
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