Nice in Neon!

Dedicated to the Neon Nice People!

Whirly moving glowing coloured patterns neon nice,
Like bands of colour often double or thrice!

Stripes of brightly coloured light,
Broken or un-broken 'i-ching' right?!

'Rizzie' and Dizzy waved around,
Beautiful light show for the spellbound!

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Nice in Neon!
By Kazytc
August 2008

Dedicated to the Neon Nice People!

Like electric sparklers shimmering with movement,
The neon glowing glow sticks make light dance in filament..

Bright neon glowing light so beautiful and bright,
Lighting up the dark and mysterious night...

The party atmosphere amidst their vibrant glow,
My daughters 18th birthday in a club well what d'ya know!

The bonfire party aside Sefton Park lake,
How beautiful the whirling patterns the glow sticks make...

Whirly moving glowing coloured patterns neon nice,
Like bands of colour often double or thrice!

Make neon sketches against a dark back drop,
Made in formations hey wanna swap?!

Figurines and formations all shapes and sizes,
What a genius their maker devices!

Stripes of brightly coloured light,
Broken or un-broken 'i ching' right?!

Strips of colour in dizzy patterns,
Eyes on children wide like the ring of Saturns!

Glowing right before your eyes,
Hey how they quickly meserize!

'Rizzie' and Dizzy waved around,
Beautiful light show for the spellbound!

Copyright:K:August 2008

i Ching is the Chinese book of changes and is an ancient
predictive oracle using either cois of Yarrow stalks thrown
to determine 6 broken or unborken lines (Hexagram).

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