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“For most of history, Anonymous was a woman.” -Virginia Wolf

Cascading in fluent language as such
were phrases of wisdom; and wordings
lost in-between solidarity’s repetition
became another form of wiles towards self
preservation

Modesty acknowledged something unknown
yet  true…

Plaster moldings of art enamored tidings
of seductive art~

And nothing more pliant remained true
to form of its former self

From ivory to bronzed hues, notes
raised on high, nothing like home saw
mere glimpses of self; but paraphrased
slang of her vowed in secret promises beyond
treasured life being reborn once again…

Leaving  times gone by the shells of
significant tenures underneath traits
of home

Author notes

FYI: I always place quotes at the very beginning of my pieces

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    August 30, 2008
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    Well expressed and thought provoking...
    Thanks for your participation. Good luck.



  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 30, 2008

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    i didn't know that, about Anonymous but i like this whole poem keep it flowing and good luck in the contest.


  • Mad Moon silver member
    August 27, 2008

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    Oh my goodness; this is outstanding!
    Girl; I love your voice in this, and all the beautiful phrases...there are too many to count! The quote you chose (like your all previous words) is wonderful. Where you went with it is even better! Love this, Rae!! One of my favs by you, indeed. ...huggles! (to quote you! )


  • Salt Therapy
    August 26, 2008

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    Jeez rae, this is probably the most beautiful poem I've seen from your work. I love this so much. I hope you have good luck in this contest. ILY CHAN CHAN

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