when the leaves blows in the breeze
the wind makes you quiver down to your knees
the owl hoots in the night
and its hearing is unmatch
its sight is sharp enough to pierce your hidden secrets
beauty is in all shapes and forms
from a spider weaving its beautiful and decisive web
to a deer and gazelle; graceful enough to model their stuff
the lion strong enough to break iron and make it look like a feather
whatever floats in your boat
wherever you make go
know that anywhere and everywhere nature unfolds
Author notes
ichigosama
A contest entry
- A Thing Of Beauty Unforgettable by suseann.
900 points, ended August 29, 2008, 9 entries
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what do you think? please, don't be too cruel; nobody's perfect.
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from a spider weaving its beautiful and decisive web
to a deer and gazelle; graceful enough to model their stuff
the lion strong enough to break iron and make it look like a feather
whatever floats in your boat
wherever you make go
know that anywhere and everywhere nature unfolds
just amazing imagery here and in so few words, it squite astounding! Good job and good luck in the contest! -
Beautiful!!! Thanks for entering!!!
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Great Job!!! I think this is really nice!! Good Luck in the contest!!!! keep writing, I look forward to reading more from you!!!!!!
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thank you for your lovely poem, love Kiarna
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While this covers a plithera of creation in living beauty. It truthfully merited a final edit by the author in rereading.A couple of item lines intent wasn't very clear due to mistakes in grammer. But all in all a nice effort put forth for our reading enjoyment. Thanks for entering and best of luck in the comp.
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Nice poem. Nice beautiful description of the beauty of nature. I love nature.
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