Never be in slumber loneliness,
over in perfumed rustling zephyr,
hoping between blurred green gaiety,
an emptiness provokes to babble bubbly.
So confident to presume something awe,
over momentarily with smooth gestures,
munching an inanimate panting confusion;
to sound shockingly illegible murmurs.
To feel chewed between vengeful affections,
decided never to afflict my negative karma.
Author notes
Prompt: 5. Munching monkeys never nap over.
A contest entry
- PIF Fun TIme by Riftkin.
625 points, ended September 1, 2008, 9 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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This is great, thank you for entering my contest.
Many more poems are left in your quill I hope.
Riftkin
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a great take on the promt full of strong emotion I dont like negative karma its no good for anyone good luck in the contest
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