Faltering to change course,
to bypass heart in doubting clouds,
caring emerges, but
unfortunately too late,
to liquefy love's steam.
Author notes
~spiritualangel~
Prompt: "I tear my heart open, I sew myself shut.
My weakness is that I care too much." - Papa Roach
20 Words
A contest entry
- Morning Quickie 10-20-30 by Cerulean Sunrise.
475 points, ended August 26, 2008, 7 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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nice.
Vapor often escapes us.
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