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Fly


Gonna fly my
little star-ship
Take my pyramid
on a ride
Fly back and forth
across
my memories of time.
Touch the bad
then let go.
Carry the good
back to home.
Write them down
in my life's tome.
Carry them down
to the sea.
Cast them out for
all to read before
I sail my pyramid
into eternity.



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  • raggyann
    October 15
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    ive been gone to long
    and came back to read this beautiful poem
    well ritten my friend


  • Talking Toni gold member
    January 3

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    In The Arms Of Jesus...

    We are missing you down here David...but know you are FREE like none of us will be until we too, are in the arms Of Jesus forever in our heavenly home...We will see you then!!!


  • Kathleen a Nazarene
    November 30, 2008

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    His Tribute to Life!

    Wow....I'm writing this knowing it won't reach Bob's eyes but I can see why he was loved by many! See you in Eternity Bob! We'll chat about poetry and The Greatest Poet of all time!


  • xxvampyregirlxx
    November 15, 2008
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    aww.... well done


  • parenchma
    November 15, 2008
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    I found you too late
    But I see the life in your eyes


  • a.changed-soul.
    November 14, 2008
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    Fly..Fly away. Fly to Jesus.



  • PoetsAngel
    November 14, 2008
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    Fly free my friend


  • dustookie2
    August 31, 2008

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    Fly little sparrow northward to the sun.. smile am not singing it.....the journey of life Just what do we cast out is up to us....your trademark wisdom rest within these lines just dont sail off for a long long time.


  • DogFish silver member
    August 29, 2008
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    ...sounds like a plan!


  • Haiku-bless-you gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    Live your life and leave your mark, that others may know you have been here. Life is full of choices, we leave behind a legacy of influence to those that follow. Thoughtful poem, thanks for sharing.

    Dennis

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