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Hope on the Course

Hope is ours
with the dream
of life ahead,
as a pea to the pod
we need each other
to make life easier,
we are all samplers
in a large candy box
all depends on the taster
how beautiful you taste,
hold the opening of mind
to all fluttering words
along the course;
dodging golf balls


Author notes

4) Hope is a waking dream...Aristotle

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  • Manoj Sanyal
    August 30, 2008
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    Nicely penned...
    Thanks for your participation. Good luck.