long bill perceives
tiny feet clatter
shy fisher bird
wandering alone
golden feathers glint
jewel of the beach
hungry eyes
an empty bill fills
long contentment
Author notes
picture prompt
non-traditional haiku chain (3 haiku)
A contest entry
- KINGFISHER HAIKU by Swan song.
2600 points, ended September 5, 2008, 17 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Your third haiku was very strong and all three were good but i feel the thirst one was the best
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