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weird love poem

Is it possible? Is it wrong?
To be so madly in love, to completely belong
to someone you've never met
to someone you do not know.

When I hear his voice my heart just sings
but when he's not around it's like binding strings
suffocating my heart and tearing me apart.
If there was just some way to start again, a restart.

But love doesn't allow escape nor
will it allow me to forget your
smiling face and the sound of your voice.
I've made my choice, you are my choice.

I dream of meeting him, maybe
then I can be free
of all this pain
love I would gain.

Holding him close.
Staring in his eyes.
Just being near him.
That's all I want.
I Love him.

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I'm just thinking alot so this is the jumbled mess that resides in my brain. I don't even know if it even applies to the contest. sorry if I wasted your time

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  • misshugglebugglez
    September 27, 2008

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    hey, i thought this was great! aren't you in a predicament? =) cheer up! it was an awesome poem!
    hugglez!
    -adria


    • Yo-Yo
      September 30, 2008
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      thanks

      yep i'm in a predicament but it's great I really love him and i trust him with my life.


  • luna-midnight gold member
    August 31, 2008
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    awwww, this is terrific, i like it *hugs*


  • sora.
    August 26, 2008
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    =D

    ohhh come on, if i wasn't on here i would be wasting my time on much less productive passtimes, such as playing counterstrike or prince of persia. =D

    this is gorgeous!
    it IS possible to be in love with someone you've never met properly. =]
    "That's all I want."
    *cries*

    greattt work!

    • Yo-Yo
      August 26, 2008
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      thanks

      hey don't cry. it's not that good but really thank you

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