Would you find me
if I was lost
amongst the rotten apples;
slimy and wormed with hate,
come find me sleeking in society
plunging into veins of happiness
draining them into anger management,
would you love me again
if I married another
under our blossom tree,
seeking long lost love
you express - no more for me,
would you like a younger
me or can you stand the aging
of wrinkles with cellulite;
like the toothless horse
that can't feast on grass,
would you feed me?
A contest entry
- Would You... by VoltaicHypnosis.
1400 points, ended September 14, 2008, 21 entries
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Comments
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damn!
I wanna enter this competition and reading your poem has made me a tad bit doubtful lool i love this xx -
wow this is intense I like where you took this! Vicious and artistic, always a fantastic combinatation - thankyou for taking the time to look and best of luck!


