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Inferno Ice

Blistering savvy
posers of not want;
torch the slaves of love
and underworlds into pain,
burning gazillions
of flames
ravishing apple peels
to hurtful seeds;
leap from the inferno
through the frigid ice

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    This is great, thank you for entering my contest.
    Many more poems are left in your quill I hope.

    Riftkin


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008

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    a great take on the promt with some brilliant imagery and emotion espeicaly in line seven-eight good luck in the contest