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the Rays of Light In Our Life

When we were young,

  There was hardly a tree there.

We planted some.

  As they grew the rays begin show.

 

In the fall the leaves fell.

  The trees went to sleep.

Years past as time did keep.

Man earns what he sows.

 

Many years later,

  The trees we now look up to them

The branches are over our heads.

  How the rays shine down.

 

In the spring, when all is green.

  The trees awaken.

Life starts in againg in new.

Another season, a new chapter too.

 

The trees stand tall,

  We are in the fall of life.

The rays are finer as the shine down.

  We gather in the light.  

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  • z etoile
    August 26, 2008
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    Beautiful well done Mac keep writing.


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    August 26, 2008
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    This really brought about a peaceful memory for me. Growing up by mountains and trees, basking in the slivers of light that shone through and brightened even the worst of days. Wonderful imagery, now I got to go look at the picture that ins;ired your wprds.
    Good luck in the contest.

    Storm