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Neverending

Vicious in my feelings
In charcoal night, a fire
Claws of beasts and hands of men
Wither into antiquity
Even the mighty fall to Chronos

Sometimes, the moon shines like silver
Melting in time and design
One who stands here neverending
I am prisoner to this universe
Oh, what I would do for an absolute sleep

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  • Riftkin gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    This is great, thank you for entering my contest.
    Many more poems are left in your quill I hope.

    Riftkin


  • maralisa silver member
    August 29, 2008
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    a great take on the promt love the imagery I liked both of your stanzas good luck in the contest