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On the Machine

The machine won!
a day at the jungle factory
of corrugated box cages
towering around me,
an eye raised the stacker
I played with it all day
I got it in the right place
to raise automatically,
I wasn't letting go!
down it came on my thumb
boy was I dumb
the machine won!

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  • Juggalo-King
    August 26, 2008
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    Lol

    Yes I Say it did win Nice wright