Love nights to quench fires
Suleyman yearns and always desires
The free happy spirit Hurrem he acquires
Hurrem eager to entertain, she never tires
Her incisive cleverness a sharp blade set to remove
Any enmity or hostilities that move
Inside the seraglio as well as outside to prove
Her absolute devotion to her sultan to groove
Hurrem is her name and she is like breeze
A little merry soul to please.
Her charming sight kept away all concubines,
becoming the only God-sent angel in his eyes.
He was inundated by her splendor and spirit
Any disobedience triggered revenge was culprit
Young, raging beauty their life would intertwine
An overpowering need of possessiveness
A full-fledged temptress of a woman with ferociousness.
Hurrem her name is and freed she would be
The thick silky fiery red locks cascading
On the red silk covering the connubial cradle lingering
There she lays waiting for her rebirth in nonchalance
And he, waiting aching for his renaissance.
Her Buttery soft skin relating
The submissiveness of her virgin body alluring
A superb creature unadulterated and chaste
The charm and enticing taste.
The magnificent set to commence initiation rites,
fervent nights elevating him to tremendous heights.
The volcano of sensuality exploding into a lava stream
Stroking and savoring the delicious cream
Fountains of love erupt giving way to syrupy nectar,
Discarding all that yields ugliness specter.
A living trance for a one thousand and one night to spend
unremitting love, bliss and vows never to end
With the virgin bloom to bud following that night.
He swam in the profound oceans of her stunning eyes
Barely able to surface and catch the stars in the skies.
She, overwhelmed by his regal presence
Her sultan is a magnificent handsome bundle of presents
From the first sight she fancied and designed to have him mesmerized.
Call her a demon or enchantress; she captivated him in her paradise crazed.
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This is quite good, but hard to read because of the background. My suggestion is to change the font to white so that it is seen better. Best of luck to you.
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thank you so much
It worked
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Extremly fascinating.
Hello Nermin...Is this your clear imagination or there is some historical background...and the poem too is handsomely original...amazing indeed.
Rahbar.
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This was quite intense...maintained the exotic feel throughout with the use of unique and varied vocabulary. The excitement effectively builds and culminates in the final stanza.
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thank you for entering. I can't help but wish that it was a border instead of a full background so it was easier to read.
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That's a very impressive piece of work with great dynamics. Mine pales in comparison. Happy trails and may all your journeys be good ones
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Thank you my dear
your sweet encouraging words made me fly to cloud nine, and i am blushing badly, my cheeks are burning. Thank you so much for your kind words
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wow.. just wow...
Stroking and savoring the delicious cream
Fountains of love erupt giving way to syrupy nectar,
Discarding all that yields ugliness specter.
A living trance for a one thousand and one night to spend
unremitting love, bliss and vows never to end
With the virgin bloom to bud following that night.
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and I thank you from all my heart
You give me greater confidence. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment dear. I owe you.
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Excellent
A magnificent peon to love. Imagery, rhythm and rhyme are just fine. Strangely enough as I first started to read I was reminded on the Rubaiyat of Omar Khayyam.
A link shortly for those not familiar with it. Thanks for sharing. Here's the link:
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I do love you my dear Clovis
Your words give me so much confidence and elation. My goodness! I just hope that you are not only complementing me. I looked at it and I know it needs some corrections but cannot tell you how I am feeling now/ I LOOOOOOOOOOVE YOU. THANK YOU SOOOO MUCH -
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You are quite welcome, indeed. Hope you have a good day.
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