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Don't

Softly spoken words beat though my heart
like the melodies you sing so beautifully.
All but hesitant to give it another chance;
please, don't tear down my walls.

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For Elliot
Tuesday
OneLastThing--x

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  • innocence jaded.xx
    September 8, 2008

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    Wow. This really honestly spoke to me so much. I love how you wrote so much in four lines. Incredible. I loved how you put this together. Very relatable & very creative. Thanks for entering, love, & good luckkk ♥