bed and breakfast
beside the ocean
your naked body
arms crossed
over your breasts -
cheeky grin
my tongue
between your legs
a loud wave
Author notes
A "bed and breakfast" is a room and ensuite for hire in a private residence. This haiku sequence is set by the Great Ocean Road.
A contest entry
- Sensual Haiku by Dalaney.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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Grin
this is wonderful, naughty Ku! chain, whoops ther goes my mind . Feel another naughty Ku contest comming on. Grin! -
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naughty
yes, we had fun, LOL.
Bruce graduated from haiku class tonight. -
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Oh so glad
he has been working 18 hour days and was stressed out, now he will be happy playing with advanced haiku, will have to message him, thanks for letting me know
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Bruce
You're welcome. I hope he's proud and happy of his achievement. Just like you are... -
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yes
he just messaged me he is estatic
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loved these - especially the last two... beautifully sensual!
~ Nicolette
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yes
that is perfect. I like this one allot and no troub;e with the AHHA
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ah - aha!
nice to know that. thanks. -
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there is hope for me yet!
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Wow. I love this one. It's so vivid.
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vivid
Thank you for your appreciation. I appreciate it.
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This should've gotten Gold.
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Haiku??
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wow, long time no read...
ok, six months, I had to reread...yep, haiku is very hard...so my original Q---which form is this?? If you love haiku...then you know there are many forms..which one is this?? LOL--rotiku..very creative.... -
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rensaku
These haiku are connected - so I think it's called a rensaku. is that correct?
which form do you think it is?
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form?
which form of haiku? erotiku!
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Good luck in the contest, I think you did pretty good for the contest, but I also think this should be marked adult only. Thanks for sharing. UNT
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