Lyrics voiced upon pen etching
paper muse
art ink spread message
soulful song sung in mind.
Poetic tears flowing...
Heart felt emotions
floating endlessly
Expressive, true the love
held close to hand,
crafted words chosen
her devotion
to you...
Author notes
2) A poem begins with a lump in the throat. ~Robert Frost
A contest entry
- Quote contest for you by Manoj Sanyal.
370 points, ended August 31, 2008, 10 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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Powerfully expressed...
Expressive true the love
held close in hand,... Would you mind to recheck the language/ grammar part?... I may be wrong but I'm doubtful.
Thank you for participation. Good luck.
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Corrected thank you
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WOW Mum This is very Powerful.. I love it so much.. the imagery just jumps right off the page. Fantastic job.
good luck in the contest
kat
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thank you hun xx
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Oh wow Julie!! I just love the imagery in this poem. You did a great job with it. Good luck in the contest sis.
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very wonderful poem connected with the prompt::: I think we have all felt this way at one time or another. great work. ♫ truetome
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Beautiful poem hunni, you have expressed the sorrow very well, deep set emotions here. Good luck in your contest Hunni
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a very deep poem with mixed emotions and imagery I like stanzas from one-six good luck in the contest my friend maralisa
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hmmm...This poem is very interesting! I love paper craft, etc. This is a very creative poem!
Have a good night!
Magikal Fairy Poet
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hmm, will have to ponder this one a while, too many jumbled thought provoced, deffinately can´t organise them into an organised comment that would do this piece justice.
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