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Peteskid's Birthday

Walk the tumble weed
stretch to a new year
make sure you jump over
rolling boulders,
never fall in the cracks
and jazz us
with your intellect,
love you always
even on your
BIRTHDAY!!!!
may it be a happy one

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  • ten thousand cicadas gold member
    September 4, 2008

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    Special words of wisdom in these well wishes--perfectly apt. A sweet, "Watch out for the obstacles and do your thang!!!" poem. Thanks you so much for taking part in this, katie!


  • Peteskid gold member
    September 2, 2008

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    Ahhh thank you for the wonderful words..and such good advice avoiding difficult things and Never miss your Birthday!!! thank you so very much...PK


  • poet2angels gold member
    August 26, 2008
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    What a lovely poem to celebrate a wonderful poet on his birthday!
    Excellent poem...


    Lynda