stars wink on sky
lone earh below
damsel on show
alluring watching
tempting them behold beauty
half naked
keep them guessing hidden treasures
she reveals and hides
gap too instant
pricks inside thirsty
without wetting dry
Author notes
Bob Dylan song inspired
A contest entry
- This is a verse prompt. by Topaze.
1750 points, ended September 6, 2008, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Great take on Dylan
Misspelling in second line, otherwise great take on the song. I like the way you worded it and the flow was pleasant as well. Great write.
mandie
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Very nice,
good luck in the contest, rissa
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ooooh I forgot to read the second half.
wow, eek, ouch, you naughty boy. -
This was nice to read Venu.
half naked?
what are you thinken about today?
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A very fine piece indeed, thank you for this wonderful entry in this contest. My best wishes always.
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