Tell me, am I being rational?
Tears had been burned,
through the heated glares of the world.
I have come to know...
this system of things will forever be my foe.
Tell me, am I am being rational?
My heartbeats faded,
through the roaring sounds of the people's voices.
The lord of this world have been exercising his powers,
against us, against me.
The rationality of being against the world,
should I continue?
I am a dreamer, and a very good one,
I visualize a place where he was abandon
in the abyss will he be thrown,
but the time is just coming,
and hurrying till it reach the end,
I hope I can see his desolation,
that I may rejoice with the others who go against him.
May his existence come into the state of nullity,
into a naught,
that I may feel the life seep into my veins again.
Be gone.
Author notes
this is something spiritual...
thanks for such a very good contest...
A contest entry
- what's the size of your sorrow? by Randomly Beautiful.
300 points, ended September 7, 2008, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - ~ Word Prompt~ by Frozentearz.
525 points, ended September 16, 2008, 12 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
My sorrow, tell me...
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The Lord of this world indeed exercising his powers to keep us all confined to the blackness of the abyss in one form or another. A very deep piece! Thanks for entering and best wishes in the contest.
Frogz~ -
I could feel the place of blackness that sometimes leaves us feeling between the here and now. And how one would want it to be gone.
Thanks for joining in.
Warm thoughts.
Frozentearz -
Interesting write, and I can see the depth of it; you ask some very thought provoking questions with your descriptions.
Although I will admit to being disappointed as I do not know what your sorrow is actually covering in full, which leaves me hanging like a cliff hanger, and I dislike those, lol
Best of luck in the contest though! -
Spiritually Great! Can touch anyone's heart.
Summer51
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great job!
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