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Dead love


I tried to stay away,

But my desire ran wild

Even though you're gone

My love has grown strong

 

The days are filled with 

Lonesome sleep and dreams

Of a dark romance that teases

My half broken longing soul

 

Hunger feeds through veins

Of the weary who look upon

My cold wintery white skin

As I stalke the dead night 

 

Your lust finds unnerving ways

To taunt me as I lustfully

Eat at the innocence gifts

Of lives tragically taken 

 

Hope dies each time your 

Laughter flies up over me 

As you appear out of no where

To rapture my wanton heart

 

Begging not an option I 

Give in to my want as I 

Drink from you wastefully

Taking on your dark life 

 

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  • febijef
    June 26
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    Let love lead you to your heart and you'll find your soul.

    Excellent write and enjoyable to read.

  • this is breath taking
    it its a fantastic poem
    your a great writer

  • The picture really suits the peice, the driving, an lust with in this peice and the emotions that I cant describe, really kept me hanging until the end. i enjoyed reading your work!


  • Lanasaur
    March 18

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    OMG!

    this is so good for a free verse! i really enjoyed reading this! i have noticed many of your poems are dark but your personlaity is bright. Great job!
    Lana
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  • Wow this is absolutely amazing.


  • guardianhost gold member
    February 9

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    Mezmerising

    Though I am fearful of the unknown there is something so intriguing in your poem. Dark and sensual. Enjoyable read. Sad yet alluring...


  • Nai Eltonfay
    September 6, 2008

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    Wow,just browsing and see words of deep darkness,emotions somehow somewhere from
    the past emerging from light into darkness
    Intriguing


  • Disturbed Prodigy
    August 29, 2008

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    I am in love with the poem, your words have enticed me into just a state of being i haven't been in a while, thank you, keep it flowing and again thank you

  • DarkRomantic113
    August 26, 2008

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    OMG...

    This was so beautifully written, Kahy. Amazing imagery and original phrasing. I love the dark themes in this poem.

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