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~One more Day~


How can I neglect to remember
you, whom I have so much love,
I knew definitely that myself
causing misfortune, but please help.

I'm no longer be able to live,
so badly to be anymore capable,
even a thought, I'm invincible
for pretences of love, precise to you.

Bent my knees in front of you,
to pardon again with an excuse,
promise to do anything for love,
even ready to jump from the roof.

Pause stalemating to make me happy,
be un-contrary, forgive one more day,
to begin afresh again to love sweety,
to throw an anger for an erroneous past.

I swear for an eternity to appreciate;
to be able to clutch you in my embrace;
forever holding to love day and night
to think ever that, we're made for each other.




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Prompt: Option 1:
For One More day

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  • Rebekah-Ann silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    What a beautiful love declaration! You did this with so much grace!

    Very well done!
    Becks