Hope begins in the dark,
The stubborn hope
that if you just show up
and try to do the right thing,
the Dawn will come.
you wait and watch and work;
you don't ever give up.
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MashaAllah U have A sinceren and very well mind..
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I like this one but I feel you could enlarge it a bit. Maybe expand the imagery of the dawn and the dark...Peace, Rhonda
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"The right thing!"
This is a nice piece, and it's begging to be expanded sometime..
It's one of those stanzas where the words seem interlocked in the intricacy of the image that's being created...in this case simply with the words "dawn" & "dark".
Keep it up.
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i gave up a long time ago on the one i 'love' it just doesn't seem worth my time on waisting to get my heart broken yet again
but I will always wonder what if this and what if that it's a good thing you are still sticking with the one you love cause maybe you want have the what ifs in your mind when you are together again
a very good peom
thank you for sharing
keep up the great work
kitty23
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This is a very good insight into hope and how we should never give up, because all too often if we do, it also ends in darkness.
Good write.
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Very inspirational! I love the first line, about hope beginning in the dark. Great write, short, with a nice message
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Hope
Nice message raped in beautiful words. keep writing hope will lead you to success
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