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Disco before dawn

fantasmic whirls
of pleasure saturate the air
the spectrum plays
a rhythm across my fingers
merging the subtle muse of moonlight
to a dancing soul

time stills two heartbeats
a wrist flutters-
smile wavers;
a kiss
becomes lost
in translation...

A contest entry

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  • Rizzie
    August 26, 2008
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    very pretty! good write for the contest