I want my fingers
in the black nest of your hair
pulling you to me
I thirst to taste the
holy water of your mouth,
poem on your tongue
I need you to come
to my bed, the pulse of you
within my softness
Author notes
I took some liberties with the traditional haiku/senryu form
A contest entry
- Sensual Haiku by Dalaney.
1050 points, ended August 26, 2008, 19 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
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This is beautiful. I absolutely love it.
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thank you
eve
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I love this... vivid and beautiful
adam
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I wish I could thank you in person right now...
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After reading this I wish you could thank my in person right now too
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thank you
eve
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oooh I like this, it's as if it's one poem but you broke it up into haiku.. very sensual and sweet poetry
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thank you very much
eve
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