You entered my soul like a breath of air,
Slowly penetrating my lungs.
With ever exhale, your essence flows though my veins.
Creating the warmth of an endless love.
If you exit from my life,
Death would be welcomed at my door step.
For life would not exist without your love.
I would find the need to ask God for forgiveness.
I would plead upon my knees a hundred times.
Not letting destiny take you from me.
Forever I would long to taste your sweet lips.
As I would miss the smiling of your eyes.
Holding you within my arms is like poetry.
While the words flow from within my heart
And your beauty expels from your pores.
Memorizing me forever, with your innocence of love.
You could tear my heart from my chest.
And I would still love you for ever.
Never feeling pain, only the tender caress of you hands.
Surging the energy of life upon my flesh.
You entered my soul like a breath of air,
Slowly penetrating my lungs.
With ever exhale, your essence flows though my veins.
Creating the warmth of an endless love.
Please tell me what you think
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f you exit from my life,
Death would be welcomed at my door step.
For life would not exist without your love.
I would find the need to ask God for forgiveness.
Everyone must feel this way at a point in there life. To love someone enough that you'd feel empty or unwhole without them. I enjoyed this piece very much! Great write -
The sentiment of love is always a matter of the bliss and the poetry always makes this love a wonderful expression..well done...
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thank you for entering. i enjoyed reading this poem.
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This is exactly what I was looking for great job. Thank you for entering the contest. I really like how deep this gets.
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