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Mj

My heart was molded by someone.
I, for one, was dazzled by such love
Caressed, am I with your loving hand,
Happily taking in your breathe
As I began to believe that someone could be alive with you.
Ever since I have seen your face,
Love has sprung to my being
Avoiding it would be just senseless...

Just being with you would be enough
Apart from you, I would be nothing.
No, I won't let go, not anymore...
Apart from you, my world would be void
Ease, make me feel at ease...

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DOLPHIN
kishi-tenshi
cute contest...
hope that you'll like this...
it's a love poem...
I love this so I hope you'll do too...

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Make me Cry. ... One way or another

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  • Redeemed15
    August 26, 2008

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    I do love it. You made me cry. I know everything this poem talks about. Thank you for entering and good luck.