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Loves' Ballet

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Of sweetest kisses
mind fallen into desire
with heart set afire

To pleasures' center
lips tracing tender journey
on skins' soft firmness

In rhythmic union
swollen loins now full
till passions' release

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Sensual Haiku...


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After contest redone this one when I realized the meter was off.....
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  • mysty rain
    August 26, 2008

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    WOW!

    Wow! What an ending. This is excellent and I enjoyed reading it. Thank you for your comment on mine. Your friend in Poetry, Mysty Rain


    • Rclane gold member
      August 26, 2008
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      Thank you for your time in reading and commenting as mentioned this is an edit of the first after I realized the meter was off. I glad you enjoyed and you are very welcome.


  • Dalaney gold member
    August 25, 2008
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