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Launch


Rockets streak across the skies,
strategic and swift in their ways,
all major centers shall be struck,
it marks the end of freedoms days.

Prayers are whispered with hopes,
a denial of the simple facts,
as the reaper waits patient for everyone,
in the foolishness of mankind’s acts.
















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  • Sweet Impatience gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    I really love your take on the prompt. I pondered for a bit.. reading your poem and then I went back to look at the prompt.. I'm amazed. I really really love this poem
    excellent job on both..

    good luck

    kat


  • Cynthia Gaines gold member
    August 26, 2008

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    Great take on the prompt, and good luck, Poet!


  • charcoal
    August 25, 2008
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    are you singing it right now?
    coz I can hear it
    great strumming lol