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Cyanotic

Azure assimilation
of his cranial magic,
          she exists
only in a shimmer.

                A figment
of a writer’s imagination,
her world is his words
  and they ripple

beneath her feet
                  in a never-ending story.

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  • Nicada silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    This is a powerful take on the picture prompt and you have said so much in just a few short lines. You have used some beautiful imagery here. Great job, and thanks so much for entering my contest. Blessings, Patty


  • Loki silver member
    August 26, 2008

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    "Azure assimilation" - sigh

    You never cease to amaze me. The title was magnificent and the last line put a smile on my face. Thank you angel, you're a shoe in.

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