never caught a falling star
never had a wish come true
I walk with my head low
kick sand
see a stupid starfish
mermaids pirates sealions
messages in a bottle
glass the color of liquid fire
castles voyages potions spells
all come rushing back
close my eyes and make a wish
Author notes
pic prompt option #5
http://night-fate.deviantart.com/art/elahy-ben-a-85478592
A contest entry
- Guess What? That's Right Another PIF Quickie!! by Sweet Impatience.
1000 points, ended August 26, 2008, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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this is beautiful to me.. I really enjoyed reading your poem. you speak volumes in your poems.
I love this poem of yours. excellent job on both the take and the poem
good luck
kat
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May all your wishes come true. This is good. You have a nice "clean" style, and by that I mean you do not clutter your work up with a lot of unnecessary stuff. You keep it simple and that is refreshing.
Wish I could do that more.
Garrison
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and I wish I sounded more grown up and poetic
towers of chrome and glass and quicksilver on the roads is what fascinates me lol
thank you so much for your feedback though
yeah should be thankful for one strength that I do have..simplicity
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